athousandsplendidsunsaplang - Character Analysis

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I would add that some stuff about Laila…	SierraJ-G	0	5	SierraJ-G	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: Good, and I agree since Aziza …	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: You should probably mention hi…	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: Good!	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: I think that's technically cor…	patm2012	0	0	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: Good contrast!	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: "him"	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: "the two of them" ma…	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: Good!	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: It sounds a little bit like th…	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: You could add that he threaten…	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: Good job, and you can ignore p…	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: Very minor but you could say &…	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: Put the period after the page …	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: I like this sentence, but mayb…	patm2012	0	0	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: I get what you're saying but m…	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013
Comment: Good job with the brackets	patm2012	0	1	patm2012	Aug 28, 2013